Dating Sim Screenshots

A few weeks ago i had a flash commission that fell through which left me with a bit of free time on my hands. So i decided to try and make a dating sim/visual novel game. Haven't gotten far enough to put out a playable demo yet so i hope these screenshots will do. This is a really slow process, slower than i anticipated really. I've never made a game like this before so any suggestions on what to add would be helpful. But i can't add every suggestion because i don't know how to do much with actionscript and am learning as i go along.

Objective of the game is to get Rhea a date. There will be 4 dateable guys:Mouse, Lucky, Ryu and one i'm on the fence about.Suggestions are welcome though. Will be appropriate for all ages although i'll probably throw a bit fanservice in it. Is aimed for girls but guys can play too. Actually, most of the NPCs are busty women lol.

Whats Done so far
Marissas' Shop
1/2 of Mouses' Dialog
LangFa shrine
Rheas' Room
1/2 All Items
World Map

This game has characters/environments from my comic Moon Reflected in Water [link]
Promo Poster

Game Demo